I could start with saying a thousand things. I could start by delivering a line so enticing, so intriguing that it will prolong your curiousity to the point of you reading further along. I won't do that.
Not because of the sudden urge to expose my different and pecuilar thoughts, but because my story speaks for itself. Introductions are only an alluring passage as to attarct a reader's eye; Which is why certain books are guranteed immediate failure. An introduction should speak to the heart, not eye. An eye can only see so much. Engage yourself into a story that isn't different from all the rest, that isn't even written in a way that couldn't be written better; it's just a story that you will later gloat you read, to discuss, and forget.
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Her appreance send shivers through nurses, and even the doctors themselves couldn't help but feel uncomfortable. It wasn't that her looks were horrendous; quite the opposite, she was heaven's earthly figure.
Her hair was a stream of flowing halo that pours down her shoulders, covering her delicate skin. Skin so tightly covered over bones, you would think it was hugging it. A close hug, a deathly hug. If it tightens anymore, you cold say the skin would become her bones. The fingertips moved into slowly cautious movement, as if afraid to reveal their identity. Her body spoke with such precautious manner; her body spoke of years of fright and hiding. She would crawl, and would almost seem child-like if it weren't for her piercing eyes. They seem to send you into the crossbeam of hell, passing by all tormented souls that scream in agony for everything they lost and everything they will never have again. They scream in such pain,that you could feel the waves of hollow echoes pass through your body. You then realize it's nothing more then an illusion, nothing more then a pair of eyes. Yet the journey was over, and you will never forget it.
Alicia smiled softly, although on her fragile face it seemed painful. Puny humans, she thought, amusing herself by glaring at a male-nurse.
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